I'll give a small summary of the article.
Here, I'm going to make a criticism on the article. In the fourth paragraph, there is only one reason why parents expose their children to gadgets and electronics. The article said that the result found some reason why they do so. Therefore, the number of reasons written in the article is too small than the article should introduce.
... Here it was my opinion, but I read the article again, this criticism is not proper.
The article mentioned about a study that searched how many parents let their children use gadgets and electronics.. The study introduced showed that the parents give electronics to children under age one because they want to run errands and household chores. Gadgets distract and calm children, and is used to get children sleep.
See the original article.
Here, I'm going to make a criticism on the article. In the fourth paragraph, there is only one reason why parents expose their children to gadgets and electronics. The article said that the result found some reason why they do so. Therefore, the number of reasons written in the article is too small than the article should introduce.
... Here it was my opinion, but I read the article again, this criticism is not proper.
The article mentioned about a study that searched how many parents let their children use gadgets and electronics.. The study introduced showed that the parents give electronics to children under age one because they want to run errands and household chores. Gadgets distract and calm children, and is used to get children sleep.
See the original article.
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